Sunday, July 06, 2008

2 hi ku 4 u

1. Before

lie in bed alone

naked, healing, eyes open;

incite poetry

2. After

lie in your made bed
alone, naked, eyes open;
mislaid poetry

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

rock on with the haiku! thanks for the comment. that's pretty deep. thanks.

aafrica said...

hi Gayle, i'll definitely write to you before i go to Atlanta next year!

very nice poem. i've always thought haiku is the hardest form since there is so little space.a

Ryan said...

Nice haiku! I'm not one for poetry, but I love everything you post up here. They always have such deep meaning! Do you have a book? Cause If you don't, you should!